Here is another poem from my anthology "िदवारों की धङकनें" called "िकनारा". It was written from jail, as a sort of present for Mummy- the only gift I could give her on her birthday, along with a rose I had grown in the high security prison complex yard I was jailed in.
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5 comments (टिप्पणी):
bhaiya,i wish i cud write something like this for my mother too(whos been the pillar of my strength always).although i made her read it and guess what? contrary to my imagination; instead of cheering u up she became all tearful and started howling on me that i'm good for nothin!poor me!luv u for this one!
Atul:
hello amit bhaiya..how u doing these days??
i read ur poems on the blog..they r really very good..
especially the one u wrote for aunty..
it seems tat u have got a very strong liking and love for poetry..its really good to see ur inclination towards it..
If by being in prison for 10 months can bring about such a dramatic change in you, then better is to........ - 007
Deepak Kedia:
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Aap ke poem mujhe rula diye amit bhaiya.Koi comment mein likhta hai nice poem,Koi likhta hai mein bhi apne mummy ke liye esa ek poem likhunga par kitne us kavita mein aap ke dard ko samajh paye,Kitne yeh jan paye ki us kavita ko likhne ke liye istemaal huye kalam mein syahi ke jagah aansu ka istemaal kiya gaya hai,Kitne yeh jan paye ki us kavita likhne wala ladka apni maa ko yeh bol raha hai ki jail ki char diwari mujhe nahi tod pa rahi hai par maa aap ki aankhon mein aansu dekh ke mein ro pad raha hun.
Us waqt us maa ke mamta pe kya gujar rahi hogi jab uska beta musibat mein fasa hua hai aur wo madat to karna chahti hai par kar nahi paa rahi hai.
Amit Bhaiya mujhe maaf kardena mein kya likh diya mujhe pata nahi.aap ki sab kavita mein padha aaur mahsus kiya ki woh samay mein aap aur aap ke pariwar ke sath kya gujra hoga.rula diye amit bhaiya aap mujhe apni kavita se.
aap ka deepak kedia
You described the things very nicely. Its really painful that a big part of our society was not treated even as human being. but in present the main problem is that who got the success in dalit society, most of them don’t want to have any contact with the society.. n who r their leader most of them use them as vote. but I respect Kashi Ram because he tried to make them confident. I cant forgot his these words..'daliton ko aarachhan lene wala nahi dene wala banana chahiye' really that’s the spirit.. bt still I believe that, if people like Gandhi n Jyoti ba Fule who were not dalit but fight for them, will not come out from the society this struggle cant say complete.. its a struggle for equality, bt it should not b convert into a castist fight. it should b for unite the society not for divide.... any way conga rats for nice article..
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